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Email Copywriting

Ecom Email Hook Rewrites From Your Own Customer Reviews

Welcome and cart email hooks rewritten from your reviews.

Posted byMussab Ali
2 weeks ago
  • Content Writing
  • Email Marketing
  • Voice of Customer
  • Marketing
  • Written Communication
  • Copywriting
From
$1,500/month
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Overview

Monthly retainer of $1,500 for ecommerce brands whose email click rates have stalled. Email hooks are rewritten using what your buyers have already said in their reviews. Subject line, preview text and opening are rewritten as one piece. Days 1 to 14: every hook in your welcome and abandoned cart flows is rewritten, however many emails those two flows hold. Reviews are read and ranked first, and the ranked list ships with the copy. Days 15 to 30: the new hooks are loaded into Klaviyo and split 50/50 against your current version, with numbers reported as they land. From month 2: four campaigns a month, plus reworking whichever hooks the split challenges. Guarantee: if the rewritten hooks lose to your current version on click rate over the first 1,000 sends, month one is refunded. No revenue is promised. Ideal clients: DTC brands on Shopify and digital product stores with live flows, already selling, a review base worth mining, and 10,000+ subscribers so the split has enough volume. Two retainer spots are open. Portfolio: https://drive.google.com/drive/u/1/folders/1EVJnS0VUmrpG_2zyFuhgba6f5Hb3t3mF LinkedIn: https://www.linkedin.com/in/mussab-ali-051359209/

Deliverables

  • Rewritten hooks (subject line, preview text and opening) for every email in welcome and abandoned cart flows
  • Ranked list of customer review insights
  • Klaviyo setup of a 50/50 split test against your current version
  • Test results reported as they come in
  • Four campaigns per month from month 2
  • Reworked hooks based on split test results from month 2
  • Refund of month one if rewritten hooks lose on click rate over the first 1,000 sends

How it works

  1. 1Days 1 to 14: read and rank your reviews, then rewrite the hooks in welcome and abandoned cart flows
  2. 2Days 15 to 30: load the new hooks into Klaviyo and split 50/50 against your current version
  3. 3Report numbers as they land
  4. 4From month 2: write four campaigns a month and rework hooks the split challenges

About the seller

Mussab Ali
Copywriter
Pakistan

I'm Mussab Ali, a conversion copywriter and email strategist for ecommerce and digital product brands. I've spent 8+ years writing content for brands, and these days I focus on the copy that moves revenue, from welcome sequences and promotional campaigns to sales emails and ad concepts. My anchor client was The Busy Honey Bee, an Australian education brand, where I ran their email program on retainer and rewrote feature-led promos into pain-point-led emails that drove a 9.23% visitor rate from opens. I also lead PC Gamers of Pakistan, a Facebook community of 120K+ members, which has taught me a lot about what makes an audience stop scrolling and act. I'm now building creative strategy into my work, handling Meta ad concepts from the first hook through to the funnel. If your list is quiet or your ads get clicks without sales, let's talk about where the leak is.

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